I know you've all been dying to see a sample of the novel I've been working on. Not really, since I haven't told any of you I was writing one... I can hear the crickets. Here goes nothing:
"Kaleen had rolled a log to the edge of the clearing where they could sit under the trees and not be seen, but have a perfect view of what was happening to the burnings. The two shared Marsha’s dinner in silence and when done they looked at the burnings for a while. One looking upon his wife no one knew why he loved her, he knew. Eddie didn’t understand, and probably never would. The other gazed upon the first creature resembling a human being that she had slain. The feeling wasn’t great, but not dissatisfying either. She knew she had done the right thing, after all he was a cold-blooded killer, but somehow the humanoid features made it harder to think she had been right in killing him."
Let me know what y'all think!
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